When the sun goes……
My heart trembles with fear
Perhaps it’s the time of my death
I scream loudly
Oh! God….
Oh! God………
The dreadful darkness slowly rules over me
My heart begins to crack…
TRANG….ANG……NG……G
Ouch…ch….h ! What a shout?… I make
Suddenly I fall down into the stream of fire.
Splash….lash….sh….h ??
Then everywhere there is silence…ce
Everything had gone
The tragedy begins…..:( 😦
The stream had swept everthing far away…
Far away from this magestic world
Breaking my beautiful heart
Burning my powerful mind
Cursing all my courage and desires
Putting out the energetic lights of my dreams
Destroying all those tiny small hopes..
The cruel stream had swept everything,
everything from my life
Now,No more existence of mine
Nothing at all….
I have gone a long miles away
Away from this worldly universe
I have gone………
Everything of mine has gone………
Everything has gone…
-Prajjwal Sharma
-2015/4/16(2072/1/3)
Hello Pajjwal, it is a pleasure to meet you, and have you follow my blog. I am impressed with your words and themes. I am going to follow you. I don’t want to miss any more beautiful writes. Blessings and peace. 🙂
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Yes I have.I also donot want to miss any your writings too.Thank you for the visit.
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You’re most welcome…The visit became a follow! Peace.
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Well done. There’s a lot of meaning in those few lines.
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I am glad you understood it.Thank you for the visit miss.
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This is very beautiful and touching. Thank you for pointing me here 🙂
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I hope you will like others too..Have you followed me?I did already….Hoping for your support.
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Thank you very much, yes I have followed you! I am heading out the door now, will have a look further later 🙂
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Have a good journey.
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Interesting use of sound. Thanks for pointing me to your blog. I’ve followed and shall regularly return.
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Thanks for your appreciation…
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It’s very intense. every line lives to leave an impression! 🙂 Great poem. Keep posting! 😀
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Thanks
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You’re welcome Prajjwal.
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I have already followed you.Have you?
Any ways I will do my best
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Yes I am glad to follow! 🙂
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Awesome….point well taken.
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I will do my best and keep on posting.
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A powerful and passionate piece, Prajjwal. Such a tragic story summed up in those final two lines. Very werll written.
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Thank you mam.
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This is a beautiful piece of writing. Congratulations and keep writing.
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Thanks and Much Appreciated…
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What a man can’t understand is Death,which seems mysteries,and you have presented in these lines so clearly
The stream had swept everthing far away…
Far away from this magestic world
Breaking my beautiful heart
Burning my powerful mind
Cursing all my courage and desires
Putting out the energetic lights of my dreams
Destroying all those tiny small hopes..
dear prajjwal go on ,go on , you are a shining star who touched my heart and others too.
thank you.
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Thanks sir.I am from all the support and love from you and hope the same from the world…
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I appreciated your words and perspective! Great writing!!!!
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Thanks for your appreciation.
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